Monday 2 November 2015
Once upon a time...there was a big dark castle. It was extremely scary. I couldn't see anybody but I could feel somebody watching me. How did I feel? I felt scared I could see a ship, I could see long grass, I could see a man and I could see a skeleton in the water.
By terina
Year 4
2 November 2015
Hello Terina,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your scary story. I like the way you wrote about what you felt. I almost felt scared too. I hope you get to write about some happy things as well.
Mrs Krausse