Dracula by Kelly
One dark night Lara, Max and Bella went for a ride in the forest with their bikes .They saw a sign which said: “Do Not Enter” and there was a different pathway.They kept riding their bikes along the good pathway until they saw two hotel’s . One of the hotels had a window that was broken down into pieces. So they decided to rather go to the nice hotel.
They opened the door and heard a little kid screaming and feeling scared. Max felt something crawling at the back of his neck. All of a sudden an evil man scared Max, Lara and Bella with his terrifying face. The evil man caught Max and disappeared in the hall. Lara said: “Where is Max?” and they saw Max’s shoes left in the hall. They saw a hole under ground and they went down the creepy steps.
When they got to the bottom there was Max tied up with duct tape. Someone was coming and Lara and Bella hid in the box. When they saw the evil man, Lara came out off the box and grabbed a knife and chopped off the evil man's head. Bella untied Max and they ran as fast as they could out of the hotel to the police. The police went inside the hotel and took the body away.
Lara, Max and Bella was glad it was all over and never went into an empty hotel again.
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Hey Kelly,
ReplyDeleteLove the story and you hooked me into reading it but next time instead of telling the reader what's happening describe what's happening to the reader and the surroundings so it will be much more cool to read it and describe how the evil man look like,And also could you write prequel of this?I wanna see what happens next to Bella,Max and lara.
Hey Kelly,
ReplyDeleteLove the story and you hooked me into reading it but next time instead of telling the reader what's happening describe what's happening to the reader and the surroundings so it will be much more cool to read it and describe how the evil man look like,And also could you write prequel of this?I wanna see what happens next to Bella,Max and lara.
Hey Kelly
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Hey Kelly
ReplyDeleteNice story! Could you right some more stories about some different things as well?
Hi Kelly
ReplyDeleteNice story Kelly!!!!